My essay that I didn't do correctly

             It was during the mid-year holidays,I had really short hair.I witnessed an incident that I can never forget.I did not even bother to try to forget it.....

             It was about 11 o'clock on the evening.I was scrolling down my feed on my social network.My neighbors had gone to Hawaii for a vacation.My family decided not to go anywhere this year.......again...The last time I went on a holiday was when I was 6 years old.Just then,I heard a soft whimper from a dog.I figured that it was my neighbour's dog.That was what spooked my suspicion.

   

             I looked out my bedroom window.To my surprise,I saw two men in black(not from the movie) ,wearing black masks,climbing into my neighbour's house through the side window.The burglars were very careful with their actiona as they did not make a single sound...even when they got out of the bushes....

            So here's the thing,my neighbours have an alarm system set up in their house.Not only that,but it has a hilarious alarm sound..That alarm system is also quite loud, so when the burglar got into the house,the alarm sounded.

            "HAHAHA!!YOU GOT BUSTED!!YOU GOT BUSTED!IN YOUR FACE!!YOU PETTY BURGLAR!"it went.

            It was so loud that the whole neighborhood could hear..I quickly contacted the police enforcements and by the time the burglars tried to escape,the house was already surrounded by police officers and nosy neighbors...

           >this was supposed to be an essay with a format that I haven't learnt yet?so only did half of that format..it also had a word limit (200 words) I also crossed that word limit<

 -AVWE-